Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is an adage that says “health is wealth”,
for
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from
individual
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the individual
an individual
individuals
to be in good state, the
well being
a contented state of being happy and healthy and prosperous
wellbeing
is Paramount. So
therefore
, the availability of emergency services is expected in most countries, even though, the modern technology may not be provided.
This
essay will discuss the likely causes and basic services need to be rendered in most state hospitals.
Firstly
, most people denied themselves of getting medical care because they are financially incapable, they rather employ self medication and use available fund to meet other basic needs.
Also
, the distance of available hospital discourages them due to lack of cash. Ignorance is another factor that
affect
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affects
people from visiting the clinic because they are not enlightened enough,
this
thus
affect the population of the country.
However
, If the government can render basic medical services in management of common diseases
such
as hyperthermia, malaria, maternal care, communicable disease like tuberculosis and
first
and in all primary
institution
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institutions
(the health centre) will reduce the mortality and morbidity rate to a minimal level.
For example
,
pregnant woman
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pregnant women
a pregnant woman
about to deliver will be attended to, and any case needing the attention of a specialist or sophisticated medical equipment for
further
test like Laparoscope, MRI (Magnetic Resonance Index) will be transferred to more equipped hospitals because
this
equipment
are
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is
expensive to maintain and purchase, so few are available, and specialist are
much
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many
. In conclusion, the implementation of fundamental medical treatment
this
increases the productivity and give good census to the state. I strongly support the opinion of
free medical scheme
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the free medical scheme
a free medical scheme
for better future of our younger generation and the Nation.

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