Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some people in our world believe that legal bodies are mainly reasonable

for

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to

increase in overweight in children, while some other people think parents are responsible for

children

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child

obesity

. In my opinion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree that both government and parents are equally responsible for

obesity

in children.

This

essay will look at the key features of how

government

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the government

and parents are responsible for their

child

obesity

.

Firstly

, governments while playing a major role in developing

civilization it

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civilization, it

has started to prepare academic curriculum which lacks extracurricular activities and sports

further

making their physical fitness to null. Physical fitness and exercise play a major role in keeping a

child

body and mind healthy and away from

obesity

.

However

, on the other side, governments are planning to commercialize by encouraging fast food centres and restaurants that attract children and making them consume oil and fat foods which gets accumulated in their body leading to

obesity

.

Secondly

, parents are

also

considered to be responsible for

child

overweight. Most of the parents

are preferring

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prefer

their

child

to advance their mindset along with technology by providing them with mobile phones and laptops so as to become successful in future. Though it is

helful but

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helpful, but

helpful but

technology is making children to study and play at one single place and making them away from social activities, which is leading to major drawback in maintaining physical fitness leading to

obesity

. Overall, I would conclude that, If, both legal bodies and parents take a step to include and maintain physical

excercise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

in their daily life and curriculum, it would lead to their children, a healthy environment and a positive impact on society.