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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

#people #reason #language #travel #work #country #someone
Genetically modified seeds are widely cultivated these days.
This
 assists to reduce the problem of
food
 scarcity in a great extend, which means, since these products are resisted to any kinds of insects and weeds, production of these crops can be flourished to meet the
food
requiremnet
required activity
requirement
requirements
 significantly.
Additionally
, scientifically produced either vegetables or fruits can be taste better and look more attractive than normal products.
Thus
, by cultivating these items in large scale, can be reduced problems associated with lack of
agriculture
Suggestion
agricultural
 land and farm lands. Others believe that
this
 can lead to serious repercussion to the environment as
this
 cause imbalance in the
equillibrium
a stable situation in which forces cancel one another
equilibrium
 of the ecosystem.
Similarly
, there is a high chance to invade these crops to
non Gm crop field
Suggestion
non GM crop fields
non GM crop field
a non GM crop field
 and
also
 break the
food
 chain which may resulting extinction of some animals and plants. Many consider, later on
food
 industry become under the
controll
power to direct or determine
control
 of various bio- engineering companies.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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