In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

Nowadays, several people prefer to consume fast

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since it is economical;

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, there remain some disagreement as some consider

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can have negative effects on human health. In my opinion, I strongly believe that consuming these items definitely have positives, especially, to working families. On the one hand, those who support convenient

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argue that these are taste delicious and affordable for most of the families and I support

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point. In other word, these

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food

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can be purchased by working class due to it is less expensive than other organic

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.

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, as they do not require to cook after returning from a job,

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allows them to spend more time with children.

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, nowadays,

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packed meal has both diet and traditional version,

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, consumers can choose according to their preference. Take a company called Pizza hut as an example, they supply both

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versions

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, so it is extremely easy to choose the one customer looking for. Despite,

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, opponents of the above argument point out that, by eating a large amount of fast

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can lead to serious

hedalth

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

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problems.

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is because these are

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make an addition (to); join or combine or unite with others; increase the quality, quantity, size or scope of

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with preservative, additive and

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colour, which often have the property of carcinogen, resulting, cancer. Apart from

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, these contain

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excessive amounts

an excessive amount

of sugar, salt and oil, the danger level of

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denotes a person or thing

this

these

can result lifestyle

disoders

a physical condition in which there is a disturbance of normal functioning

disorders

: hypertension, cardiac disease, and

hyperglycemia

abnormally high blood sugar usually associated with diabetes

hyperglycaemia

. Ultimately, those who eat these on a regular basis become patients. By way of conclusion, even though consumers

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vary

in their

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a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

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regarding convenient

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, I again reaffirm that

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refers to the speaker or writer

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completely agree that these

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foods

have many advantages. It is vital that these

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outlets be

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outlets to be

monitored by the authority to ensure the quality and hygiene of the edible which prepare there.