Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world.some believe it can't be changed while other say some ations can be taken to change this situation Discuss both view

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Nowadays

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deforestation and pollution is burgeoning day by day

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which put bad impact on flora as well as fauna

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It is reckoned by some mortals that nothing can do to solve

this

obstacle while others believe some measures can be taken by individuals and authority to alleviate the current situation.I am going to scrutinize both views in

further

paragraphs To embark with, population is increasing every day and for their houses and comfort folks cut the trees so that they make their own hotels in that place.

for example

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trantica fores

t is

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makes

cut because humam have no place for

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ive and they want to make hotels by replacing woods from that place Admittedly , there are some steps by which

this

situation can be solved like if masses say no to plastic and use only paper things

then

it decline the detrimental impact put on animals and plants by using the non-recyclable things In conclusion , if Authority make strict laws like do not use plastic ,less deforestation and people give full cooperation to government

then

this

hurdle is eradicated within days

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