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Most of the people in the society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact to the society due to this?

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Nowadays, most people prefer to watch suspense and thriller
crime
 films or TV series, as it gives them a thrilling experience. I think that there are various reasons behind the increasing interest in watching these kinds of films.
However
, watching too much
crime
 scenes, can adversely affect the human's mind.
This
 essay is an attempt to explain the reasons of interest in
crime
 movies and effects on the society.
To begin
 with, as learning is the best teacher, learning from others experiences, save people from being victims of criminal activities. People can make themselves aware of their surroundings, by watching
crime
 movies.
Additionally
, most of the
crime
 TV series are based on the real incidents,
therefore
, people like to watch these series, to keep themselves updated by the latest way of crimes.
Furthermore
, the viewers are allured by directors by adding a special kind of audio and visual effects in
crime
 scenes, which make the scene more interesting.
However
, it has many negative impacts on the human mind. By watching crimes constantly, people start doubting to others, which can be a reason to break the relationship.
For instance
, a survey, carried out by the
crime
 branch, has revealed that, seventy percent of divorces, occur because of the doubting nature of their partners.
Moreover
, people feel unsafe everywhere, by imagining the
crime
 scenes as shown on the TV. Though, there are some positive impacts too,
such
 as people could be able to take some preventive measures in their routine life to combat
crime
 acts. To conclude, it is good to learn from other's mistakes by watching
such
 shows, but, we must avoid watching it continuously.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fascination
  • mysterious
  • psychological
  • intricate
  • edge of their seats
  • justice system
  • reflection
  • critical thinking
  • exaggerated perception
  • desensitize
  • real-world consequences
  • public opinion
  • criminal justice
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