More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree?
Immigration has always been a popular event amidst the human race for a long time,
this
is often informed by various reasons which differ from different individuals. Recently, a higher number of professionals Linking Words
are migrating
from Suggestion
have migrated
under developed
or developing countries to more developed ones. Some people consider relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
this
as only normal and natural while others think Linking Words
such
migration is tantamount to stealing resources from the undeveloped countries. In Linking Words
this
essay I would be writing to disagree with the school of thought which says movement of people to developed countries connotes stealing from the poor countries.
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Firstly
, many of the Linking Words
under developed
countries are faced with serious issues of relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
unemoplyment
and under the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
empolyment
. With statistics made available by research, a larger percentage of university graduates in these countries end of being jobless up to 5 years after graduation. They are the state of being employed or having a job
employment
therefore
reduced to roaming the streets Linking Words
seacrhing
endlessly for jobs which are actually not available. Others who are lucky to get a job are either underpaid, or doing something completely unrelated to their field of study since that was all their country to offer.
diligent and thorough in inquiry or investigation
searching
Also
, due to continuous growth of technology, countries who have breakthrough technologically would require individuals from parts of the world to Linking Words
partcipate
in the movement if the technological evolution must indeed go round. All major companies would need on their team, people from different races and backgrounds in share in something
participate
other
to understand and effectively handle problems with high level of precision. The professional immigrants would be able to bring their (often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
first
-hand Linking Words
experince
face-to-face with technology to the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
profer
a lasting solution
present for acceptance or rejection
proffer
which
in the long run is in the benefit of the said poor countries.
Conclusively, developing countries should not stand in a pitiable position of feeling being stolen from through immigration rather, they should come to terms with it as movement is one of the characteristics of humans and Suggestion
Which
most importantly
, immigrants are not often coerced, Suggestion
most important
more importantly
instead
they do so out Linking Words
ot
away from home
out
at
of
their
our in or at that place
there
voalition
.the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
volition
coalition
evolution
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