some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that
music
is Best
way
to contact people different
culture
as well as ages.I
am completely disagree
Suggestion
completely disagree
with
this
statement because
music
not best source to know the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
nations
Suggestion
nation's
culture
On the one hand, by
music
people can rejuvenate their mind and
music
give knowledge about
language
of
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
nations and
it
it is
it's
not best for uneducated persons because mostly
music
sang in their own
language
so that why
this
not helpful for other
nation
people. Apart from
this
, people prefer to their own
language
Accept comma addition
language, music
music
and they know about the meaning of
music
. On the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
hand
,
Accept space
,
some people argue that it is
best
Suggestion
the best way
way
for people to contact with another
nation
. With the help of
music
people
ehance
increase
enhance
their knowledge and know about the
language
of another
nation
, they show interest in their
music
and feel fresh. To sum up, according to me
music
is not
best
Suggestion
the best way
way
to contact people with each other and to know the
culture
of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
nation
.
Accept space
.
Many other best
way
to know the
culture
of another country

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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