Many people say that the use of animals for the purpose of experiments is cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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It is thought by some people that using animals for experiments are
killed their
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killed, their
lives in order to explored new innovative things that help human beings in saving lives for ages.
However
,
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,
While
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that
such
experiments give us
worth while
sufficiently valuable to justify the investment of time or interest
worthwhile
information which ins and out advantages are not only enjoying human beings but
also
for other fauna. I do not agree with the statement for some specific reasons.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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