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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

#threats #environment
Global warming is
main causes
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the main causes
 of concern
of
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about
 climate change, due to uncertain weather change
occures
come to pass
occurs
, creating a natural disaster like a drought, heavy rainfall
,
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,
hurricane, cyclone, extreme heat, cold and rain
.
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.
 The main reason for increase of environmental for
instante
a very short time (as the time it takes the eye to blink or the heart to beat)
instant
instance
 is
defoestation
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
devastation
, industrial
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
 and car pollution. In
this
assay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 I will
eloberate
marked by complexity and richness of detail
elaborate
liberate
 the
casuses
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
causes
 and possible solutions.
First
 and foremost, human population is
exponentially which
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exponentially, which
 leads to the expansion of cities
as a result
 more and more forest are
destroying
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destroyed
. Forest and trees
contols
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control
controls
 the environment positively trees absorb
grees
a thick fatty oil (especially one used to lubricate machinery)
grease
 house gases like carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide and
relese
release, as from one's grip
release
 fresh oxygen, as
resute
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a result
result
results
 for
deforastation greenhouse leven
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a deforestation greenhouse living
deforastation greenhouse living
deforestation greenhouse living
deforestation greenhouse leven
 is increasing in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
an atmosphere
 at a critical level which absorb heat and eventually the atmospheric temperature rose.
Secondly
 increases of
industrilization
the development of industry on an extensive scale
industrialization
industrialisation
 producing chemical releases poisonous gases and
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
 gases which
dervastate
cause extensive destruction or ruin utterly
devastate
devastated
 the forest, release of some gases like chloro
floro
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Floro
 carbon creates
hole
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a hole
 in
Ozone layer
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the Ozone layer
 in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Climate change
  • Earth's atmosphere
  • Carbon dioxide
  • Methane
  • Nitrous oxide
  • Emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy efficiency
  • Afforestation
  • Carbon footprint
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