Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many people are purchasing items like groceries, movie tickets, books through online shopping and it has got more importance.
However
, it has some advantages and disadvantages.
This
essay will discuss
about the
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about, the
less
time
consumption
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consuming
and user friendly as advantages. Quality and fake products as disadvantages.
Firstly
, through online shopping the
time
taken to place and process of ordering is very quickly.
At
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By
present majority of people are employed and due to the work. They were unable to buy certain things manually. When these things are available on internet people were
tend
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tending
to prefer buying
throung
from beginning to end
through
online compared to manually. By purchasing through
internet
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the internet
the consumption of
time
to place
order
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an order
is low and quick. It
also have
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also has
other advantages like the
websites
which through products are
selled
disposed of to a purchaser
sold
are user friendly. More number of people don't spend much
time
to buy these things manually. But these
websites
are
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
to use and it helps
user
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the user
users
to find his favourite ones.
For instance
a survey has been conducted to know about
shoping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
shipping
systems like online shopping or manual shopping.
Majority
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The majority
of people had
preffered
more desirable than another
preferred
online shopping as it is
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
to use and less
time
consumption.
However
, it
also have
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also has
has also had
some disadvantages like quality and quantity. There are some sites which provides online shopping but the
product
which is available will be of poor quality. People
spends
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spend
are spending
on
this
product
will face loss and
unsatisfy
not having been satisfied
unsatisfied
. Because of less duration
time
and low quantity.
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Also, there
are some
websites
which
provides
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provide
fake products
on
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with
low price. Most number of people were attracted to
this
product
and they will buy those
product
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products
. Once when they received
there
of them or themselves
their
product they
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product, they
will feel disappointed. Example a friend of mine recently purchased a
product
through a fake website. He thought that website was genuine. When he received the
product
he get to know that the
product
which is obtained is a fake item. There are many people who will face similar problem because of false
websites
. Overall, there are numerous of advantages through online shopping and some
disavantages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
can be eradicated by taking care. Online shopping is user-friendly and processing is very quick and
also
some people will receive fake products and poor quality items by
beling
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Beling
being
belling
fake sites. As the advantages are more than the
disadvantages many
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disadvantages, many
people were likely to buy
item
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an item
the item
through
internet
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the internet
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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