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letter for the Masters' Scholarship position in Cyber Security at Japan University. As a highly motivated undergraduate, I have gained a high distinctive result, hands-on
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in different
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areas and skills. My undergraduate study was a breakthrough academic achievement
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my early childhood dream and professional career where I gained a remarkable theoretical knowledge accompanied with a lot of experiments, course projects, mini and final projects which build my academic and
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experience
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. I have participated and contributed to the university community as a member of a Mekelle University-Mekelle Institute of Technology
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MU-MIT) peace forum, charity club, in managing and performing academic, social and cultural events. Until recently I have been working in the
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as an Exploit Tool Researcher in a security,
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and IT projects based governmental organization called
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the Information Network Security Agency
(INSA), Ethiopia that enabled me to obtain an extraordinary
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experience
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with
malware
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analysis, design, configuration, implementation, and overall
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Development software applications from small to large projects that involved private and governmental organizations. I have
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worked in private organization called Trans Ethiopia as a network and systems administrator for more than two and
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a half months
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in a new working environment, culture, language, and challenges. Working in these giant companies provided me a wonderful
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in multi-disciplinary tasks, multiple vendor products, systems, and technologies.
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in
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, governmental and non-governmental organizations for almost four years in
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Malware Cyber Security
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the Malware Cyber Security
and related fields. My passion to know how things
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together with the academic achievements and
industry
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experience
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I gained made me to be highly passionate about pursuing my master's program in Cyber Security
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specifically in
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on my master’s
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in
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of Cyber Security with the title Mal Developer. To achieve my goal, I preferred Milan University primarily as it dedicates itself as a source of new scientific innovations which are globally significant with local relevance.
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, it provides all-inclusive academic grounding to scientists and
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engineers, enabling
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development of complex and dynamic systems to achieve innovation and economic
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growth, especially
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of Cyber to realize
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the long-lasting contribution
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, yet importantly, Milan University provides opportunities for students from many nations around the world, with diverse cultures and ideas that will provide me a wonderful
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. Italy
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which some of them include: high quality and world-class educational institutions with hundreds of years of international reputation, multicultural society with all religions and faiths open to new traditions and cultures which is a great opportunity for me as an international student. Italy has a lot of history to explore, rich in culture, with the English language spoken all over the world.
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in Italy. The courses I took during my undergraduate program
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Engineering) and, the researches I have conducted during my academic and as an employee together with the
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experience
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I gained in the areas of Exploit tool
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,
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in Information Network and Security Agency, made a flawless match with the Masters
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area
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of my interest. Thankfully Italy
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prestigious master’s
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opportunity. I wish to delve deeper into the subjects to be able to carry out independent
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and analysis or serve in a
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institution. My long-term goal is to become an expert in
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Development and to aid the development of
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area
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internationally and my home country where it is a demanding
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to
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is insufficient, but I am sure that I am committed and motivated enough to fill in the gap. I believe that the academic and
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background together with the huge
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experience
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has a solid foundation. Through the world-class
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and innovation of Milan University, I am confident that I will develop expertise and boost the quality of my
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potential. Your time and consideration are greatly appreciated. I look forward to talking with you soon.

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