In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

In recent years, violent content in both movies and on televisions h

ave increased.

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has increased

There are many people believe that

this

is the reason for i

ncreased

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the increased crime rate

crime

rate in society;

however

, there r

emain

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remains

some disagreement as millions of people watch these programs, only f

ew

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a few

became criminals. I certainly support the latter’s viewpoint. On the one hand, those who consider violence in movies and on television cause criminal activities in the world point out that, children who watch a great amount of time these types of shows may tend to become more aggressive towards others.

Similarly

, teenagers who often play video games and watch

crime

related subjects incite to involve

such

malicious actions or i

nsencentive

not responsive to physical stimuli

insensitive

to crimes.

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, a recent research report has shown that t

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in or at that place

there

is a positive relationship between a

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the amount

of time to s

pent

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spend

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atch

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watching

crime

related shows and c

ommiting

a statement that expresses a personal opinion or belief or adds information

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offence. Despite, the above mentioned argument, o

ppents

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opponents

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points

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this

advocate that

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,

in many countries

crime

and violence have d

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diminished

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greatly, even

greatly even

though more and more violent movies have been released. Apart from

this

, several other factors: poverty, unemployment, and i

lleteracy

ignorance resulting from not reading

illiteracy

are reasons for crimes and unrests in the society than any other causes.

Additionally

, having watched these movies, only few become convicts,

therefore

, it is thought that criminality is a behaviour pattern, not something can be influenced by external factors. By way of conclusion, while people have different opinion regarding what lead crimes in our world, I again reaffirm that violence in m

ovie

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the movie

movies

a movie

has a negligible effect on those who offend crimes.