Today, many people getting married at the age of thirties and having children rather than marry at teen age. Is this a positive or negative development?

TODAY'S YOUTHS ARE TEND TO BE MORE CAREER CENTERED. MAJORITY OF PEOPLE PREFERE TO GET MARRIED AND HAVE OFFSPRING WHEN THEY TURN 30S. I BELIEVE THAT

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TREND HAS BOTH.

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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS ABOUT HOW GETTING MARRIED AT 30 GIVES POSITIVE IMPACT AND

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, HOW IT HAS PROVED TO HAVE DETRIMENTAL ENHANCEMENT. ON THE ONE HAND, GETTING MARRIED AND HAVING JUVENILE DURING 30S GIVEVS MORE TIME FOR PEOPPLE WHO WANTS TO GET SETTLE IN LIFE BEFOR HAVING CHILDREN

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AS FINACIAL SECURITY. BECAUSE BREEDING CHILD NEEDS A FULL FINANCIAL STABILITY TO COOPERATE WITH THEIR EXPENCSES. BECAUSE BEFORE HAVING OFSPRING, THEY COULD HAVE ENOUGH TIME TO WORK EFFICIENTLY FOR THEIR EMPLOYER.

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PROVIDES OPPORTUNITY FOR THEM TO GO HIGHER IN THE FIELD.

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, YOUTH DEPARTMENT OF UK DID A SURVEY AND FOUND THAT 80% YOUNGERSTERS PREFERS TO GET MARRIED AFTER 30 YEAR OF AGE DUE TO FLEXIBILITY AND LESS RESPONSIBILTY OF FAMILY.

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, I BELIEVE THAT FINACIAL STABILITY AND GOALS ACHIEVEMENT CAN BE THE REASON BEHIND HAVING LATE PREGNANCY.

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PREGNANCY

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LEADS TO VARIOUS HEALTH PROBLEMS FOR MOTHER AND CHILDREN AS WELL. BECAUSE WOMEN ARE OFTEN TEND TO HAVE BONE DENSITY PROBLEM AD

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HEALTH ISSUSES. EVEN BABY CHILD MIGHT BORN WITH DISABILITIES RELATED TO MENTAL OR OTHER PHYSICAL MENACE.

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, HELATH CENTER OF THE INDIA REVELEAD THAT 70% CHILDS BORN WITH CERTAIN PEROBLEM DUE TO LATE PREGNANCY.

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IS NOT THE CASE WITH EVERY FEMALE, BUT, STILL, INFANT'S HEALTH CAN NO BE NEGOTIATED. IN CONCLUSION, HAVING CHILD AT 30S INDEED PROVIDE MANY BENFITS BUT ONE SHOULD NOT AVOID THE CONSEQUENCES OF HAVING JUVENILE AT 30S. IF A PERSON TAKE DECISION WISELY AND CAREFULLY

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SURELY, THE NEGATIVE IMPACT CAN BE MINIMIZE.

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Today, many people getting married at the age of thirties and having children rather than marry at teen age. Is this a positive or negative development?

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