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PERSONAL INFORMATION Yirgalem Gidey Africa Insurance Tower, Addis Ababa (Ethiopia) +2519 4370 2613 [email protected]

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2016 Junior Software Developer Trans Ethiopia PLC,

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esponsibilities ▪ Taking a course training in software-related skills and applying them so as to enhance and support the ICT environment. ▪ Participating and coordinating in several seminars with a different cultures ,

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Present Exploit Tool Researcher Information Network and Security Agency St. Gabriel 124498, Addis Ababa (Ethiopia) www.ins

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2016 Bachelor Degree in Information Technology (Engineering)

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2015 Certificate in Linux Routers and Community Networks Universitat Politènica de Catalunya, UPC;

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT FAST PACE AND STRESS OF MODERN LIFE IS HAVING A NEGATIVE EFFECT ON FAMILIES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

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