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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficulty. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university #difficulty
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It is being considered that to get into
university
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 for any
student
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 is not so easy regardless of one’s financial status. I agree that to get
admission
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 in
university
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 has some requirements that one should fulfil to get in, even if someone is ready to pay any amount.
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, many students who get
admission
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 but cannot afford the tuition fees can get a scholarship by covering its own requirements.
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, in order to have
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 in any
university
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, it requires you to go through each of the need which a particular
university
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 is looking for.
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, some universities ask students to have a very good academic record and other questions about to get passed in some standard tests.
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, some universities
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 ask for the nationality, as if that falls in the acceptable list of countries. So, whether poor or rich one should overcome all the needs of any
university
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.
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, if a poor
student
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 is looking for
admission
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 in
university
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 and he/she completes every aspect of the
admission
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 committee what they are looking for,
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 he/she will surely get
admission
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. Again, if that
student
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 cannot afford to pay the sum of money,
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 he or she can apply for the scholarships, many academic institutes offer various scholarships, but each of them has its own requirements, those again need to be covered in order to grab that opportunity. To conclude, the
student
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 who seeks
admission
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 in any
university
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 does not require to have a good financial background, all he or she must do is, complete the requirements of the institute,
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 if anyone suffers to pay,
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 there are funding’s available in various universities.

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