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Concerning for environment growing and more and more people choose recycle. Others people argue that the recycle is not enough. They suggest we need to consume less. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

#environment #people #recycle
As I'm writing
this
 essay we are in 2019 and our world faces an uncounted number of environmental issues. I, personally, do not agree with
this
 statement that we need to consume less.
This
 essay will explain and provide examples relating my point of view.
First
 and foremost, people need
food
, I mean nutritive and balanced
nutrition
 in
order
 for our
body
 to get the required
amount
 of
food
 we need for our
growth
.
For example
,
First
 and foremost, people need
food
, I mean nutritive and balanced
nutrition
 in
order
 for our
body
 to get the required
amount
 of
food
 we need for our
growth
.
First
 and foremost, people need
food
, I mean nutritive and balanced
nutrition
 in
order
 for our
body
 to get the required
amount
 of
food
 we need for our
growth
.
First
 and foremost, people need
food
, I mean nutritive and balanced
nutrition
 in
order
 for our
body
 to get the required
amount
 of
food
 we need for our
growth
.
in
Suggestion
In
 conclusion
,
Accept space
,
First
 and foremost, people need
food
, I mean nutritive and balanced
nutrition
 in
order
 for our
body
 to get the required
amount
 of
food
 we need for our
growth
.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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