Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, a large number of tourists are going to locations where
living situation
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the living situation
there is tough. Like the Sahara desert or the Antarctica.
This
movement apart from its valuable results may it will has some negative impacts
on
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of
visitors. Both items are
discussable
. To start with, basically, natural places in all over the world are really
tremendous
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tremendously
and attractive.
For
example walking
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example, walking
throughout Amazon jungles In spite of having some difficulties
such
as mass of trees and their foliage that are obstacles to pass or wild animals is worth to go see
its
the thing named or in question
it
marvelous
extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier
marvellous
perspectives like unique scenes of beautiful rivers, old trees with kind of fruits and animals that
traveler
a person who changes location
travellers
traveller
cannot see other places
.
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.
Seeing all of these nice nature will refresh explorer’s mood and breathing in pure oxygen will give them positive energy.
some
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Some
natural places like Antarctica are frigid.
Therefore
, it is more likely some
visitors specially
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visitors, especially
visitors especially
children and
elderly
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the elderly
get diseases relate to cold or probably they will be
attack
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attacked
by polar animals like
wolf
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wolves
the wolf
.
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.
also
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Also
, in some areas like Sahara desert internet and mobile antenna are out of access and
besides
this
they are far away of cities. For
this
reasons if
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reason, if
reason if
visitors got into unforeseeable
troubles it
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troubles, it
would be difficult to improve
situation
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the situation
.
For instance
, if somebody had
heart attack
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a heart attack
it will be impossible to call emergency or send him/her to hospital. In conclusion, most activities have two
side
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sides
, positive one or negative. The most important thing to mention here is
,
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,
which side is more beneficial than
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
. Visiting places where staying there is difficult, their beneficial consequences are more in comparison with
negative side
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the negative side
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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