Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant laces to live and work in, private cars should be completely banned from city centers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Increasing number
Suggestion
An increasing number
of cars day by day has choked our roads and life in these cities looks really challenging. Despite
this
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would disagree to point of banning private cars in city centres.
this
Suggestion
This
will be shown by
adapting
choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans
adopting
diferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
alternatives for reducing
traffic
. Private cars only make up to 1 % of total
traffic
in major cities. Main
roadclocks
any condition that makes it difficult to make progress or to achieve an objective
roadblocks
for
traffic
jams are commercial
vehchles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
For instance
, all metro cities in India ban commercial vehicles after 10PM
.
Accept space
.
this
Suggestion
This
has really given some relief to
traffic
jams. Managing
traffic
during peak hours would really help to curb
traffic
jams concern. Private vehicles
gives
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give
a sense of flexibility for corporate people to take up some meeting, when they are on
road
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the road
.
in
Suggestion
In
addition to
this
, People sometimes take up breakfast and finish some work
duirng
all the way through
during
traffic
hours. Private cars always prove productive in
comparision
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
comparisons
to other forms of transport. In summary,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would like to say trying out alternative methods like
odd even
Accept comma addition
odd, even
rule or segregating
traffic
in categories would really help to solve
this
problem. Putting
ban
Suggestion
a ban
on private cars without having
proper infrastructure
Suggestion
the proper infrastructure
in place could worsen the situation.
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