Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.

The public should be made aware about the importance of preserving traditions and customs, for which the government can initiate some programs: campaigning, talk shows and awareness educations.
Similarly
, the future generations, current young students, are taught about the values and significance of the traditional way of living and they must be encouraged to communicate with their grandparents who are rich source of wisdom. Apart from
this
, the government requires to ensure that television programs and soap operas are motivated to spin around the traditions of the country rather than international cultures.
This
, eventually, boosts cultural and heritage background of the nation dramatically and even,
this
can be used as a source of income later on, by showcasing these experiences for tourists.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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