one of major issues facing world today is over population. What problem arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?

There
are
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is
no
doupt
the state of being unsure of something
doubt
doubts
that
sassive
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the sassive increase
a sassive increase
sassive increases
increase
in
population
is a critical global matter. Finding the right policies to reduce
this
problem is a
government
responsibility.
This
essay will discuss the problems increased by over
population
and suggest some solution which can be
implement
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implemented
to reduce
this
problem.
On the other hand
, there are
numberous
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
serious
situvations
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
due to over
population
. The most significant issue is the
food
shortage.
Food
demand is rising
relatively
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relative
to
population
increase
and current
food
suppliment
add as a supplement to what seems insufficient
supplement
supplements
not
enoght
as much as necessary
enough
for all people. Another critical issue is luck of
accomadation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
accommodations
for everyone as
result
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a result
the result
of
this
house price will be
rose
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rising
and the number of homeless people will be
went
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going
up.Clearly
,
Accept space
,
uncontrollable
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the uncontrollable increase
an uncontrollable increase
increase
in people
lead
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leads
to many
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
outcomes.
On the other hand
,
government
or any other responsible
oraganization
a group of people who work together
organization
organisation
organizations
able to address various of
solution
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solutions
the solution
to mitigate
this
kind of
situvations
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situations
situation
. Term of
food
shortage,
government
and private large
cooparation
a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporation
corporations
should invest to
increase
produce
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productivity
production
product
with
leatest
up to the immediate present; most recent or most up-to-date
latest
technologies and new type of crops which can maximise
harvest
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the harvest
. To solve housing
resoure
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resource
problem
,
Accept space
,
new policies and rules should be taken by
government
.
Appartments
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Apartments
Appointments
should be built for
affordable price
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an affordable price
so many persons can afford
buy
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to buy
or rend roof their heads.
Government
Suggestion
The government
should make aware to use housing space more efficient ways. Nowadays,
for example
, people use smart furnitures which allow them to use one furniture for multiple
porposes
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
purposes
. In conclusion,
population
growth is
unstoppable major matter
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an unstoppable major matter
of society. While there are
food
shortage and
luck
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
lack
of housing,
government
and large
cooparation
a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporations
corporation
should
countribute
bestow a quality on
contribute
contributed
contributors
to address
this issues
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this issue
these issues
.

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