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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Now a days woman and men are working equally to sustain their
life
 goals.
Then
 it is fair to share their
house hold
a social unit living together
household
 activities together and not to give all the
burden
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burdens
 to
woman’s head
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a woman’s head
the woman’s head
 when it comes to
house holds
a social unit living together
households
. I totally agree with
this
 statement and I will clarify with reasons in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with
this
, if the couple is sharing their
house
 chores with each other, that will mainly effect to their relationship with the positive way. Because they can negotiate their day to day activities while doing
households
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house-hold
.
In addition
 to
this
, it will help to improve their love
further
.
For instance
, when the husband is trying to chop vegetables and trying to help
for
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in
 the kitchen activities
,
Accept space
,
then
 the wife would think that how helpful her husband is. So that
,
Accept space
,
 they can share their stress together and pass their
life
 borders together.
On the other hand
, involving to households together will make both husband and wife independent.
As a result
 of
this
, if a one partner
get
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gets
 a chance to go abroad,
then
 he or she can manage their
life
 without
ask
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asking
 any help from anyone. They would have better knowledge about basic
life
 hacks and how to prevent from it from sharing
house hold
a social unit living together
household
 activities when they live together. For an example, according to statistics of recent researches, from
sri
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Sri
 Lankan couples, 50%
,
Accept space
,
 even one partner has gone abroad. So that, they should know how to go with
life
 without a
patner
a person's partner in marriage
partner
.
Then
 that will give beneficence to them. And
also
 that will reduce unwanted affairs by less talking with others. In conclusion, as a couple
,
Accept space
,
 they should work together not only on
house holds
a social unit living together
households
 but
also
 on every positive and negative aspects of their lives.
Then
 only can build good and strong relationship to make their lives better.
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