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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates data about the mean monthly temperatures and
precipitation
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 of Kolkata. Overall, the
precipitation
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 follows irregular
trend
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 with very low figures at the beginning of the
year
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 and at the ending of the
year
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.
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, the mid
year
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 rainfall rate is very high. On the other side, there was an upward
trend
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 in the
temperature
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 followed by a declining
trend
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 till the end of the
year
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. In January, the
temperature
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 of Kolkata is 20 degree Celsius.
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 was followed by an increase in
temperature
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 till May, where the
temperature
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 reaches above 30 degrees, which is the highest value in the
year
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. After
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, the figure slowly declines till August to just above 25 degrees. Having remained stable for
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 one month, the
temperature
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 decreases to just above 20 degree Celsius by December.
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,
precipitation
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 level, which was just under 50
mm
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 in January, increases to 50
mm
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 by April.
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 was followed by a surge in the figure to just under 350
mm
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 by June. Following
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,
although
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 there was a declining
trend
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 in the value of
precipitation
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 rate, the figure is above 25
mm
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 till September. In October, the rate fell to almost half of its value in September.
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, In November and December the rates are under 50.
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