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some people feel that using technology is the best way to solve all our current and future problems in society, while others think we are becoming dependent and should focus on other solutions. Do you think that benefits of technology outweigh the possible disadvantages?

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Part of the
society
 is
on
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in
of
 the
opinion of that the
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opinion that the
usage
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use
 of
technology
 is the most effective way to overcome
majority
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the majority
 of the present and future obstacles.
On the other hand
 rest of the
society
 is on the belief that people are becoming dramatically reliant on it and should pay more attention on other solutions.
This
 essay will argue
in
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on
 both
sides about
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sides, about
 how benefits of
technology
is
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are
 greater than the possible drawbacks. There are many advantages of using
technology
.
via
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Via
technology
 people get easy access to everything. Because of the modern
technology
 through online we connect with anyone. To illustrate the above fact
,
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,
telemedicine
 is a good example way of treating people through online, people who are in rural areas can get treated by doctors without coming to the urban areas, so
this
 saves the money and the time both.
More over
in addition
Moreover
,
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,
technology
 can
also
 use for virtual interviews which
also
 saves the time of travelling and the cost of travelling, not only that working from home and educational purposes
also
 are
facilitate
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facilitated
 by the
technology
.
How ever
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However
,
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,
 there are many factors which can prove that
technology
 can be cause bad effects on the
society
. Factors which have been contributed to
this
are
introduces an alternative
or
 that
society
 can be corrupted by the modern
technology
.
For example
, there is a high risk of misuse of
technology
 which can be lead to serious problems
such
 as
cyberbullying
, pornography, inappropriate content socialization and addiction. Another reason is that
this
 can cause different health issues as well. To illustrate that, when a person working from home and staying more hours on the laptop or phone
this
 can lead to have obesity, because if a person going to a workplace that will give him a small amount of exercise at least. In conclusion, by using
technology
 we can get get easy accesses to everything and it will
saves
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save
 our money and time and it results
a
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an
 easy lifestyle.
This
 writer believes that the advantages of
technology
 are greater than the possible drawbacks.
Hence
, it depends on the
person whether
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person, whether
 to misuse the
technology
 or not to misuse.
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