SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THE GOVERNMENT IS WASTING MONEY ON THE ARTS AND THAT THIS MONEY COULD BE BETTER SPENT ELSEWHERE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE WITH THIS VIEW?
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essay will argue why keeping aside some budget for the country’s arts and crafts is far Linking Words
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, the authorities should consider Linking Words
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as an opportunity to attract more tourists in their home country. Places like historical monuments, temples, museums, etc. Linking Words
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for these resources has proved to be an income rather than a financial burden.
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, spending proper funds as per the priorities to the sectors has proved a proper way of Linking Words
management which
gives a smooth flow to the assigned budget and improves the financial strength of the country. Was Accept comma addition
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For example
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sight
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soon noticed a considerable rise when the government re-innovated the temple with more colours and decorations. Accept comma addition
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, visual arts and designs seem more attractive and are an important factor to be considered on priority level.
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money
to allocate the fund of national arts. I am a strong advocate of Use synonyms
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belief and consider the fact that the visual arts attract more scenic lovers and benefits the government bodies of proper fund management within a small budget.Linking Words
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