SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THE GOVERNMENT IS WASTING MONEY ON THE ARTS AND THAT THIS MONEY COULD BE BETTER SPENT ELSEWHERE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE WITH THIS VIEW?

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Arts is a treasure of the nation. Investing some amount of finance in beautifying the nation has highly appreciated by citizens and visitors. Yet some considered

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as a waste of funds wherein they believe

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should be a wiser decision if the government planned

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money

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to invest somewhere else.

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essay will argue why keeping aside some budget for the country’s arts and crafts is far

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more beneficial

than the claim made.

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, the authorities should consider

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as an opportunity to attract more tourists in their home country. Places like historical monuments, temples, museums, etc.

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the major tourist destinations whereas painted buildings, roads and streets are

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enjoyed by tourists and have been proven as the most picturesque destinations.

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as the European countries are quite popular with their scenery, and colourful houses and paths.

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, allocating

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for these resources has proved to be an income rather than a financial burden.

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, spending proper funds as per the priorities to the sectors has proved a proper way of

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management, which

gives a smooth flow to the assigned budget and improves the financial strength of the country. Was

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a false promise and has it not managed to prove the benefits as expected of investing the

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in historical arts and crafts?

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an argument is still a more debatable point.

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, a recent study by an environmentalist of Nepal has proved that the number of

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Temple, but

soon noticed a considerable rise when the government re-innovated the temple with more colours and decorations.

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, visual arts and designs seem more attractive and are an important factor to be considered on priority level. To conclude, the public enjoys the beauty and decoration of popular tourist destinations.

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essay argued why it is not a waste of

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to allocate the fund of national arts. I am a strong advocate of

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belief and consider the fact that the visual arts attract more scenic lovers and benefits the government bodies of proper fund management within a small budget.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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352 words

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enriching society
promoting cultural understanding
development of talent
creative industries
economic benefits
generate revenue
cultural heritage
identity
prioritize spending
needs of the majority

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THE GOVERNMENT IS WASTING MONEY ON THE ARTS AND THAT THIS MONEY COULD BE BETTER SPENT ELSEWHERE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE WITH THIS VIEW?

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Some people say that it is better to work for the large company than a small one? Do you agree/disagree?

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