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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#communications #it’s #letters
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What is the significance of spending a huge amount of money for
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 research? Even though many argue that
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 is for the benefits of the human, others think that
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 can be better used for more pressing issues. In my opinion, I strongly support the latter’s view because
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 research has revolutionised various other fields that are extremely significant for the mankind. On the one hand, those who believe that governments fund can be channelized to resolve issues related to health, education and infrastructure. By financing these areas, would uplift the status of the common people in the country. Eventually, they, taxpayers, feel that their money better utilized.
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, most of the outer
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 programs are launched to get either military dominance or spy on each other,
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 can be unethical use of public fund, according to some.
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, it is commonly pointed out that, only a fraction of money squandering for
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 excavations, required to provide necessary facilities for the society.
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, despite the above mentioned argument, several people believe that, the
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 excavation brings many advantages to the human, and I support
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 concept. As the mankind like adventures and explorations,
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, always has the tendency to upgrade something which was
discoverd
discovered or determined by scientific observation
discovered
 by the older generations. These studies have helped the advancement of many other fields: communication, health, and defence;
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, medical imaging techniques, which we use today were originally developed for the outer
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 study.
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, these advanced technologies
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 used to analysis images of the moon which were captured by satellites.
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, under no circumstances not any individual can neglect the contributions of the
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 research for human beings. By way of conclusion, while people are deferred on funding a whooping amount investment for
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 related excavations, I again reaffirm that
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 definitely brought many positives to the mankind
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