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Many educators believe that international exchange trips are beneficial for students. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give you opinion and include any relevent example

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Most of the professors and teachers think that it is very helpful for students if they have an international
exchange
 program.
This
 essay totally agrees with the statement because it will help graduates to achieve knowledge of different cultures and to make a good
career
 after the graduations. Travelling to a foreign university and doing one semester might give some extra curricular knowledge,
such
 as knowing the language, culture and living status of general people. A study has shown when a person meets other another from a different culture they become very enthusiastic to know their languages and it helps them to develop as a humble man towards others.
Moreover
, there was a study done by the University of Sydney regarding human cognitive behaviour and it shows people who lived in a multicultural environments or know more than one language have a better view about life than the people who lived in a single community. International
exchange
 students might have a better chance to build a successful
career
 because they have will have more experiences. Study and work abroad provide
such
 multinational work experience which helps to get a new job or build a business compare to local students.
For instance
, University of New Delhi had a student interchange program with London College and later it had shown that students from both institutes have done remarkable on their post graduation
career
. In conclusion, there are lots of benefits of having an international
exchange
 trip
such
 as it expand social knowledge and motivates to build a great
career
. It is predicted that, in the future all schools, colleges and universities will start a collaborative student
exchange
 program.
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