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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.

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In many
countries there
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countries, there
 is a huge disparity
among
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between
 the salaries
obatined
come into possession of
obtained
 by the people. Some people get
enormorous amount
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an enormous amount
enormous amount
 of money, while some people get very little, which makes them harder to
met
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meet
 their ends. Some people argue that the
government
 should cap the
salary
 and limit the difference in
salary
. I personally do not agree
to
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with
this
 view. The difference in
salary
 makes people work
harder which
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harder, which
intrun
an advanced student or graduate in medicine gaining supervised practical experience
intern
 will increase the
economoy
the system of production and distribution and consumption
economy
 of the country. If there is a limit to what people can earn
,
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,
 most of them will lose motivation to work harder. The reason why people work harder is because of their yearning to get more money. If the
government
 caps the
salary
 it will hurt the morale of the people
,
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,
as well small group of people earning large amounts is good for the country as well as the economy as they will start
small business
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a small business
small businesses
 and give jobs for many people. Of course to some extend income disparity is not a very good thing. Its human tendency to want more
.
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.
We get easily attracted by the lifestyles of
stars
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the stars
 and we want to follow
them which
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them, which
 drives us to earn more, wanting more. In order to reduce the disparity the
government
 can make
the high
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the higher
 income group pay more tax and
also
 provide free medication and education to lower income group. In conclusion the
governmant
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 capping of
sarly
definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')
surely
sale
salary
 is not a good move, in turn
government
 should empower the poor and motivate them to earn more.
This
 will make a nation strong
,
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,
powerful and developed.

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  • wealth inequality
  • economic growth
  • motivation
  • talent acquisition
  • consumer spending
  • tax revenue
  • redistributing wealth
  • market forces
  • income disparity
  • social stability
  • freedom of choice
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