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Many museums charge an admission fee while others are free. Do you think that the advantages of charging admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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Visitors have to pay
entry
fee
 to most museums, whereas some charge nothing.
Although
 charging the entrance
fee
 has several positives, I,
however
, advocate that the negative effects of
this
 on the number of visitors are far greater. On the one side proponents of former view consider that admission
fee
 will give museums a financial strength. It is due the fact that money helps the management to seek out routine expenses
such
 as personal cost, electricity and water bills, and equipments. One more benefit of
entry
 charge is that museums can generate their own revenue to improve the place more effectively
such
 as update of exhibits, keeps the place clean and attractive. Despite some advantages,
entry
fee
 in museums h
ave
Suggestion
has
many negative impacts on people, society, and
also
 o
n
Suggestion
in
museums themselves. I consider that people are discouraged to visit the museum and unable to gain the precious information and knowledge freely, s
pecially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
the poor, who cannot afford the tickets. From society’s point of view, they have fewer opportunities to access vitally significant places to learn art, history, and other essential subjects. And another significant impact on museums that they will not f
ulfill
put in effect
fulfil
the objective for which they are opened
such
 as to educate the people.
Moreover
, management has to close down the museum as they are losing their customers. In conclusion,
although
 charging
entry
fee
 gives financial strength to museums,
this
 has d
etrimental impact
Suggestion
a detrimental impact
on the number of visitors and the knowledge museums are providing.
Therefore
, in my opinion the upsides of
t
his
plural of "this"
these
do not outweigh the downsides.
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