Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

In today's age, the grave effects of global warming
can not
can not
cannot
be denied
;
Accept space
;
it has led to an ever increasing rise in sea
level
.
This
essay will
first
look at the two major problems caused by
this
worrying phenomena and
then
propose some viable measures to address them. One concern in terms of global warming and its drastic
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on
water
level
is the threat of flooding.
This
developed due to the fact that
water
bodies can sustain a limited
level
of
water
; if the
level
increases beyond their threshold, it results in massive and destructive floods. Flood in turn drastically affects both humans and local flora and fauna;
world
Suggestion
the world
stands witness of the grave loss of lives, land, animals, plants and property at the hands of these floods. To tackle
this
issue,
deforestaion
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
should be banned.
This
initiative is well backed
with
Suggestion
by
research that links forests with reduction in global warming and
water
consumption to avoid floods. Another pressing problem with global warming
is increased
Suggestion
is increasing
increases
climate temperature
Accept comma addition
climate, temperature
that actually causes
water
Suggestion
the water level
level
to rise; increase in local temperature melts
galciers
a slowly moving mass of ice
glaciers
and increases
water
that later results in floods.
This
increase is caused due to
exccessive
beyond normal limits
excessive
use of
environment
Suggestion
environmentally
damaging products. One possible solution to
this
worrying problem is to promote
environment
Suggestion
environmentally
environmental
friendly products to curb the global warming dilemma from its roots.
This
can be achieved by imposing bans on products that are harmful
for
Suggestion
to
our
environment
: that includes
use
Suggestion
the use
of plastics. Enforcing
such
steps will help us in our fight against global warming. To conclude, the foremost challenge faced by us today is to address the issue of global warming, which will eventually result in
overflooding
become overloaded
overloading
overflowing
;
however
, we all will have to join hands against global warming, through tree plantation and
use
Suggestion
the use
of biodegradable,
environment
Suggestion
environmentally
friendly products, to save our planet.

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