Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges related not only to the environment, but pollution and education as well. What problems your country will face in next years.

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All sports are potentially dangerous, including, some of the most common ones; cricket, football, and tennis.
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, these can be safely administered if provided better training, stricter laws, and safety equipments.
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, most of the sports persons who aware regarding risks associated with it.
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, road accident deaths are increasing day by day, nobody asking to ban driving. By participating these dangerous sporting activities, encourage people to come out of their comfort zone and motivate them both physically and mentally. Health is the greatest asset,
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, anything that put health
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, it is unethical to risk others life for recreational purpose.
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, sustaining life long injuries far more significant than any brief minor adrenaline rush. Extreme sports get too much publicity compared sports which are safe.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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