IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5.5

Some people believe children should get homework everyday, while others think they should not. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #children #homework
Education is a very much needed exigency part of our life. If children or youngsters do not get a good education, it will be devastating
for
Suggestion
to
 their lives. Whether or not children should receive
homework
 every day is a matter of debate. Some people believe that children should get
homework
 every day from
school
 and
on the other hand
, some people believe that children should not get too much
homework
 from
school
. Both views will be discussed in
this
 essay before concluding.
Firstly
, we must understand the concept of
homework
. The teacher is not able to cover a full course in
school
 so that they give an assignment to children.
Furthermore
, most of the students are not doing their
homework
 unless it is necessary, so it is important to give them
homework
.
Moreover
, some subjects need practice.
For example
, science, mathematics, and art need constant practice, if they do not, it is very difficult to understand for them. By giving
homework
 it automatically helps to improve. Practice makes perfect.
However
, it is important to give
homework
 to
youngsters but
Accept comma addition
youngsters, but
 children spend 7-8 hours in
school
, after
school
 if a teacher gives
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 much
homework
, it pressurizes many children.
Besides
this
, when the children get too much
homework
, they are not able to do any other physical activity which is
also
 important in their lives. And it is
also
 caused to depreciation. In my opinion, the concept of
homework
 is not harmful. The problem arises when a teacher gives too much
homework
 and when a student fails to use their time wisely.
For example
, if the deadline for a specific assignment is after 2 weeks, most students would leave it until the very
last
 minute and by doing
this
 they are putting themselves under unwanted pressure. In conclusion, I think children should get
homework
 for their improvement.
Submitted by prayagsaspara on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: