Writing Letter You recently stayed at a hotel and had very pleasany axperience. Write a letter to the hotel manager to thank them for the excellent service.

Dear Mr.Kruz I hope
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letter will find you well and in good spirit. I am one of your customers who stayed in your hotel. I am writing
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letter in order to express my gratitude for
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experience. I visited there
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week with my family.
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the fact that we took off holiday to Paris. And during our journey, we stayed there. To tell the truth, we had a
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great time in your hotel. The first thing which surprised me is that
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it is
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a lovely and cosy place, the cost is very low.
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, the price includes meals and
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entertainment
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, the staff is polite and helpful.
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, the furniture and the design of the building are
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, there is available
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an exquisite garden where guests can enjoy the environment. I appreciate your consideration. And I hope you will accept my deepest thanks.
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, I would mention the hotel to my relatives and friends. Thank you for your attention.
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sincerely, Umurzoqova Z

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coherence and cohesion
Try to connect your thoughts more fluidly to improve the logical flow of your letter. Use transition words to enhance coherence.
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Make sure to keep to a more formal tone throughout the letter, especially in your expressions of gratitude.
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Your enthusiasm and gratitude towards the hotel's service are clearly expressed, which reflects a positive writing tone.
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You provided specific details about your experience, which adds to the overall positive impression of your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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