Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This days there are

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To this day there are

This day there are

people that think that we have

manu

a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number

many

choices. I agree with

this

statement. We live in a world that we can choose to do everything we want.

For

example if

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example, if

you want to change your job us very easy

this

days

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day

, or if you want to improve your skills you just need to go and apply for more trainings, as before was quite hard as people could judge you. Another

example

that I can give is my own

example

. Because I wanted a better life for my and my family, we choose to leave Romania and we moved in

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the UK

. I will not say that was

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easy

way but

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way, but

for us was the best

think

a special situation

thing

that happened to us. There are times when you have

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

many options you do not know what to choose, and you make the wrong decisions. Young people that choose to have more freedom,

for

example

, can end up taking drugs just because they did not choose right. Overall, I think

that is

a good think that we can choose very easy

nowdays

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now days

and we have the change to give

ourselfs

reflexive form of "you"

yourself

second

change.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

194 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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