Some people believe that children's time outside of school should be filled with schedule activities such as art and music classes and sports. Others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many children or teenagers have been
advance
Suggestion
advanced
advancing
nhow
-a-days. in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events
now
how
Morover
, having in addition
Moreover
fixed scedule
in daily routine Suggestion
a fixed schedule
fixed schedule
life
is make
men perfect who wants to be Suggestion
is made
has made
makes
achive
their goal to gain with effort
achieve
to
doing some extra Suggestion
of
activites
. any specific behavior
activities
However
, some individual said, children can feel free after his or her shool
an educational institution
school
sole
soul
time so
, they have to use it to stay home with family or taking a valuable nape. I personally support to the former view with the details rather than the Accept comma addition
time, so
second
opinion
an open or empty space in or between things
opening
statment
.
The daily routine activities that describe the extra talent in the children having a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
statements
instade
of only the academic skills and in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
knowladge
. Even more it will help them to the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
achive
some extraordinary to gain with effort
achieve
achivements
in the action of accomplishing something
achievements
achievement
this
competitive society. In addition
, they could get the chance to refresh there
mind and of them or themselves
their
rebust
sturdy and strong in form, constitution, or construction
robust
this
energy out from
the educational environment. If today's Suggestion
of
genration
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
join
the extra Suggestion
joins
curiculam
classes before or after his school an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
curricular
curricula
time
, they can show up there ability to do extra achivements
in the world. the action of accomplishing something
achievements
achievement
For instance
, joing
a drawing classes or dancing classes that help to gain their hobby's skill become part of; become a member of a group or organization
join
doing
to
that child. As far as, they could able to enjoy Suggestion
of
there
hobby, parents should of them or themselves
their
focous
their the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
childeren's
a young person of either sex
children
intrested
hobby's activities.
On the other side, the students who doesn't having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
intrested
to do some extra having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
instade
of the educational in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
activities
Accept comma addition
activities, then
activities than
activities than than
then
the family time
is the best option for them. Joing
a family Suggestion
Join
time
, especially with the grandparents are
the best choice for them. So, they can learn something new from their grand Suggestion
is
gurdian's
stories and they can teach something in there
daily of them or themselves
their
life
style.
For example
, some grand parents
a parent of your father or mother
grandparents
also
like to tell a story to his grand son
so either, both the way they can enjoy their a male grandchild
grandson
life
and live the happy life
in society.
In results
, even though, the children have been Suggestion
the results
intrested
to bust up their skills or hobbies in the future, it will help them to confer a trust upon
entrusted
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
extra ordinary
beyond what is ordinary or usual; highly unusual or exceptional or remarkable
extraordinary
achivements
and give the the action of accomplishing something
achievements
achievement
tuff
surface layer of ground containing a mat of grass and grass roots
turf
compitions
to others. the quality of being adequately or well qualified physically and intellectually
competence
Instade
of sitting at home and passing the Suggestion
Instead
time
with relaxtions
mood the good skills are the best option in today's advance world.(physiology) the gradual lengthening of inactive muscle or muscle fibers
relaxation
relaxations
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.