The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart depicts the information
of
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on
recycling
rate of four materials in a country from 1982 until 2010, in percentage.
Correct article usage
the recycling
Overall
, all the materials undergo rises from 1982 to 2010. Linking Words
Meanwhile
paper & cardboard and glass containers change fluctuated, the proportion of cans and plastics always grow every year.
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,Meanwhile
Recycling
rate of paper & cardboard and glass containers increasedAdd an article
The recycling
5
% and 10% perspectively. In 1984, paper & cardboard Change preposition
by 5
rised
around 5% Correct your spelling
rose
then
fell again in 1990 at the same number in the first year (65%). 3 years later, Linking Words
this
material stood at Linking Words
highest
level (80%) compared to other materials Add an article
the highest
as well as
its position in other years. Linking Words
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At
the end, it peaked at 70%. Glass Change the preposition
In
container
, Fix the agreement mistake
containers
on the other hand
, started the position at 50%, in 1990 Linking Words
this
material declined Linking Words
10
%, Change preposition
by 10
then
increased Linking Words
into
60% in 2010.
on the one hand, aluminium cans and plastics climb until the Change preposition
to
last
. Aluminium cans had Linking Words
huge
percentage of increase, Add an article
a huge
aroun
40%. Correct your spelling
around
Meanwhile
plastics grew slowly every year, from 2% at first Add a comma
,Meanwhile
until
9% at Change preposition
to
last
.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rises" was used 2 times.
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