The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart depicts the information
of
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recycling
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the recycling
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rate of four materials in a country from 1982 until 2010, in percentage.
Overall
, all the materials undergo rises from 1982 to 2010.
Meanwhile
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paper & cardboard and glass containers change fluctuated, the proportion of cans and plastics always grow every year.
Recycling
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rate of paper & cardboard and glass containers increased
5
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% and 10% perspectively. In 1984, paper & cardboard
rised
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rose
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around 5%
then
fell again in 1990 at the same number in the first year (65%). 3 years later,
this
material stood at
highest
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the highest
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level (80%) compared to other materials
as well as
its position in other years.
At
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the end, it peaked at 70%. Glass
container
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,
on the other hand
, started the position at 50%, in 1990
this
material declined
10
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%,
then
increased
into
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60% in 2010. on the one hand, aluminium cans and plastics climb until the
last
. Aluminium cans had
huge
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percentage of increase,
aroun
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around
40%.
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plastics grew slowly every year, from 2% at first
until
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9% at
last
.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rises" was used 2 times.

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  • Proportion
  • Recycled
  • Materials
  • Trends
  • Significant
  • Stability
  • Peak periods
  • Declines
  • Plateaus
  • Growth rates
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Fluctuations
  • Notable
  • Paraphrase
  • Summarize
  • Analyze
  • Comparison
  • Introduction
  • Overview
  • Conclusion
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