Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion is the primary cause of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

The table compares the proportion of the population of one town who cycled in 2011,
according
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According
to five
age
groups. Overall, it is clear that in all the
age
groups, the percentage of female cyclists
was
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were
higher
than
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Than
male cyclists.
However
, for both genders, the proportion of the population who rode
bicycles
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Bicycles
was
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were
lowest between the ages of 18 and 59. Just over half of all females and males rode bicycles in the
age
group 0-9, and
this
proportion
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The proportion
Proportion
remained high among 10-17 year old girls, at about 42%.
However
, among
boys
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Boys
aged 10-17, the percentage who cycled declined by over half to less than 25%. The figures for the 18-39 and 40-59 year olds are much lower. In the former
age
group,
only
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Only
about 17% of women cycled, compared with just under 10% of men. Between the
ages
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Ages
of 40 and 59, the figures fell
further
, to a little over 12% for women and 8 per cent
for
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For
men.
However
, the percentage of those over 60 who rode bicycles
then
rose significantly,
reaching
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Reaching
18.5% for women compared with around 13% for men.

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