You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to let you know about some problems I have been encountering ever since I moved to the new team. As you are aware that my core competency is Core Java, but of late I was moved to new technology

that is

React JavaScript. It is altogether a new domain for me,

moreover

, I do not have any prior experience which is impacting my productivity in daily activities,

for example

, it took me 5 days to complete a piece of code which

otherwise

was expected to be completed in 2 days.

Hence

my lead Thomas was furious at me which I totally understand, but at the same

time

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it was de-motivating for me. As I am very new to technology, there would obviously be some learning curve and I would expect the team to allow me some time to cope up with the new challenge. I have always been a star performer and I am confident given some time I will come out with flying colours.

Additionally

, it will be great if you can permit me to attend a

5 day

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workshop on React Javascript which would cost around USD 500. It is a comprehensive workshop on the language which would help me to adapt quickly. I suppose

this

is the best way to deal with the problem. I hope you will understand my situation and support me

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with in

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within

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the best possible way. I will be glad if you can provide some solutions from your experience. Yours faithfully, Ravinder Jallu

Wed Oct 30 2019

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

257 words

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