Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificial intelligent jobs. What is your opinion?

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Dependency on artificially intelligent robots, to carry out tasks, substantially increase in the future.

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it is possible that artificially intelligent robots will substitute human workforce to a great extent, there are jobs that require human relationship will not be replaced.

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essay will discuss why robots are more preferred to carry out most of the jobs. Robots will eventually carry out all easy and less complex jobs. Many employers believe that robots are reliable, less expensive rather than hiring and training of human labours.

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The machine

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produces more output because they

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do not

feel fatigue or any other kinds of stresses, which may affect the efficiency of any human.

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one of the largest food chain

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restaurants

in India,

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the state or fact of existing

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that cost less than hiring. For

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the above aforesaid reasons era

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of machines will overshadow jobs.

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, we seldom give thought to ponder over that some jobs require more complex skills, emotions and particular relationships are impossible to perform by any robot.

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and foremost is human posses many characteristics to outperform few particular jobs by building trust and long lasting relationship. But simply, some jobs require a ‘human touch’.

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independent research conducted by

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marketing company that sales executive over

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the phone

are more effective than artificial intelligent answering machines. Robots will never achieve the capacity what social evolution has taken place in hundreds of years. In conclusion, the growing number of robots in workplaces will consume most of human employment. It is irrefutable that robots will eventually do all unskilled work;

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complicated jobs required specific human set skills will still exist. Ultimately, due to limitations of robots some human jobs are safer.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificial intelligent jobs. What is your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The image explains how Pu-erh ripe tea and raw tea are made

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tudents perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that cars should be banned from city centers to reduce pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?