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Some people believe that the best way to learn anything is "learning by doing.".Others would rather learn through books and from teachers.Think of learning a language.Which way do you think is a better way to learn a language?.Write in atleast 250 words

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Learning things by doing them practically always helps In building solid foundation.
Consider
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Consider, for
for example
, learning a new
language
, before learning a
language
 we need to understand what is learning purpose behind it?. In
this
 way, we can prepare
accordingly
 If know answers of some of these questions which helps in learning at
fast pace
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a fast pace
. Before learning any new
language
, the
first
 thing we can do is building a vocabulary of commonly used words in that
language
 on
daily basis
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a daily basis
. Try to use those words in
language
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a language
 we trying to learn and communicate it with people who had
better understanding
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a better understanding
 of
language
.It's possible that
same people
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the same people
 could help us in improvising our
language
 speaking ability and slowly, we can grasp the usage of same
language
 on
daily basis
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a daily basis
.
This
 will not only raise our confidence in using
language but
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language, but
 we may speak and write same without hesitating much. Languages which are very common in society, If learned
properly
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properly, then
then
 not only helps us to communicate in
better way
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a better way
 but
also
 fosters new relations in society. People who possess knowledge of speaking one kind of
language
 are always better with each other in terms of relations on
personal
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a personal
 and professional scale. In conclusion, learning a
language
 by speaking with others as well writing it down in vocabulary terms reduces the burden of dependency on others, helps in adjustment in society at
fast pace
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a fast pace
 and
also
 saves from adding an extra cost if required to learn the
language
 from paid tutors.

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