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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that
plastic
 shopping bags should be prohibited because they are one of the major pollutants of both land and water around the world. I completely agree, but I think there are other measures that can be taken before putting a complete ban in place. The reason that
plastic
 bags should be banned in the near future is because they do not
biodegrade
 and continue to pollute the environment for hundreds of years after being discarded.
Plastic
 bags are often used only once, and end up clogging the land and polluting the water, causing about 100,000 marine animal deaths each year. Even when
plastic
 does start to break down, it fragments into micro
plastic
 which causes even more damage to all life on earth. The only way to prevent throw-away
plastic
,
such
 as
plastic
 shopping bags, from seriously and irreversibly damaging our planet is to prohibit it.
However
, it is best to try to change consumer
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 before completely banning
plastic
 bags.
Plastic
 bags are not a
vitally
Suggestion
vital
, necessary
plastic
 product, only a convenience and customers should learn to replace them by using bags from home. Another step to deterring people from using so many
plastic
 bags is by putting a high price on them which will encourage people to reuse them.
Finally
, having recycle bins by which customers can get cash back for depositing used
plastic
 bags will
also
 help. By altering consumer
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, it is a good way of raising awareness of
plastic
 pollution as a whole and
this
 can lead to more action on other unnecessary
plastic
 products in the future. In conclusion, an eventual total ban on
plastic
 bags is crucial to preserve life on
this
 planet and protect it from the effects of
throw
Suggestion
throwing
 away non-biodegradable products.

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