Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion is the primary cause of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

On the one hand, those who believe that job satisfaction is a prime factor for selecting a job as a career, point out that,
definitely develops a positive attitude towards the work they do. Without
, one cannot dedicate completely for the betterment of the firm as well.
, a satisfied employer would work outside the normal working hours and even, ready to take risks for the development of the company. Considering employees, as they contribute more for the company, which enable them to secure promotions and social security benefits as well.
By contrast
, if any employer fails to provide a well functioned working atmosphere for their staff,
might lead staff to quit from there.
, others who believe salary is the most important, when choosing a profession over
the other
. Currently, living cost is increasing at an alarming rate;
, several employees opt whichever profession provides sufficient amount of salary to manage the requirements of the job seeker.
, they notice the social security benefits which
are provided
by the employer: house; personal vehicle, and medical benefits. Take engineering graduates as an example, in India most of these degree holders try to get jobs in the banking field rather than their engineering since the salaries of banking is significantly higher than the other one.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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