Some people argue that there should be a fixed punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminals who carry it out.On the other hand ,others suggest that the condition under which the criminal commits crime should be taken into consideration before declaring the punishment . How far do you agree with the statement?

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thought by some people that after committing the
crime
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offenders should be punished permanently in order to reduce
crime
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throughout the state and it makes positive conscious among wrongdoer. While there are others
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who claim that criminal should be considered for
punishment
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and get an opportunity to move a hale and hearty life.
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believe that having a
crime
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by the offenders should be given
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a permanent penalty, though
a permanent penalty though
they do not
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involve
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in involving any
crime
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with, fixed
punishment
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for
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crime reduce
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crime, reduce
hearing time as well as cases at the judiciary. If any criminal has trial for justice in
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the courthouse
a courthouse
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for example
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the location on a baseball field where the shortstop is stationed
short
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establishing
a particular section.
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, these types of trial make conscious among offenders
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hoodlums, terrorists, who are involved many criminal activities. So, it can reduce criminal activities and make fear and panic among them.
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make
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makes
people think twice before committing any
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, to control crimes, fixed
punishment
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and right constitution as well as good governance can make a vital role in decreasing
crime
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, and make conscious among citizen about their rules and law.
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, create a wholesome place where people can live sound and safe without any difficulty.
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, considering criminals for
crime
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have had some detrimental effects
in
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on
the society
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If
criminal
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the criminal
has been considered by thinking his or
she
of a female
her
social value, background and fame,
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, he can do it again in thinking his/her consideration. Indeed, without prisoning any criminal are given release
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that results, victim who
are suffered
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suffers
by
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from
with
them have to live in
threating
interact in a certain way
treating
trusting
threaten
in their locality.
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, many countries like Bangladesh have been given their prisoner in general skill and technical works that make them effective citizens, afterwards, they do not involve any offences of
crime
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. As a consequence, they can meet their hunger in involving many organizational work and own business. In conclusion
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although
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,
fixed
punishment
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is a sort of cruelty. Even though, to make a peaceful and healthy nation, all types of
crime
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activities and their prefix need to reduce in taking strong penalty

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