In some countries, parents want their children to focus on their studies only. Because of this, many young people do not get their first job until after college. In other countries, many children get their first part-time job while still in high school. Which approach do you think is better? Why?

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today’s younger generation is altering their living style by opting

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at a young age. In many nations, parents’ emphasize on children to excel in their field, to secure their

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. While in many countries, many students who are in higher secondary opt for

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in their leisure time;

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, I think the latter approach is ideal because it will teach them the importance of money and managing both personal and professional lives.

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of all, when a higher secondary student chose to do part-time

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, they understand the value of money and learn it’s important.

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, in many countries, school fees i

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extremely expensive and living expense as well, thereby doing a

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in pastimes will help them to pay dues and other school expenses.

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, they will gain new experiences and explores real world which they will face after acquiring d

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a degree

and learn an abundance of practical knowledge, which helps them to hone their skills.

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, it will help them to be productive at

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and enlighten their career in the

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.

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, they will learn to manage personal and professional life, which would be most beneficial for them in the

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.

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, managing

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and personal life are difficult task for everyone in their

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, many c

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companies, urges

employees to

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overtime sometimes to complete

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at given deadline, due to that they usually do not have time for their fiancé or for themselves.

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, their relationship affect the most because of lack of managing skills and

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honing these skills at a young age would be best for them.

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, parents’ who emphasize their child to focus on their studies rather than doing

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, obtain h

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highly paid jobs

a highly paid job

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in prestigious company and perform well in their

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. But usually they lack in productivity, management and understanding which has adverse effects and it may affect their

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life. In conclusion, gaining essential skills and techniques is one of the most significant aspect for students;

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, I think they should encourage to do part-time

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at an early age to enhance their practical knowledge and skills.