Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that rich countries should welcome more displaced people and should take care of the basic necessities like shelter and food for these refugees.

This

essay totally agrees with

this

statement because accepting more refugees can help fight terrorism in the

world

and richer nations can benefit from taking in these people. Countries with lots of resources should allow more refugees to immigrate as it will help fight the ever rising issue of terrorism in the

world

. When people are marginalized in the society and they have no food or home to stay they are prone to become extremists and turn into terrorists. People who have lost their loved ones in wars might start seeing everyone as their enemy if they are not helped and loved, as s result, they could take harmful steps to seek revenge. A study done by law enforcement agencies of Pakistan showed that 80% of the terrorists had lost their families in wars, prior to committing

act

Suggestion

acts

of terror, and no country allowed them to

immigrate

leave one's country of residence for a new one

emigrate

and have a normal life. Another reason for richer countries to have

open immigration policy

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an open immigration policy

for refugees

is it

Accept comma addition

is, it

is in their own interest. Many developed nations are running out of young and skilled population who can participate in the economic growth,

hence

they invite immigrants from all over the

world

to fill

this

gap. Refugees have the will, as well as, the need to start a new

life

Accept comma addition

life, therefore

therefore

they are best placed to help rich countries by joining as a

work force

the force of workers available

workforce

and participate in building

stronger economy

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a stronger economy

stronger economies

.

For example

, Canada has launched refugee immigration programs because Canada needs millions of immigrants to take the place of aging population who are expected to retire in the

next

10 years. In conclusion, it is a win win for everyone if wealthy countries take more refugees because it helps the

world

by minimizing the risk of people becoming terrorists and it is good for the economy of rich countries.