some people say that all level of education , from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree ?

There is no doubt that these days having handy skills as
improtant
of great significance or value
important
as
lerning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
thorey
a well-substantiated explanation of some aspect of the natural world; an organized system of accepted knowledge that applies in a variety of circumstances to explain a specific set of phenomena
theory
lesson. The question is, is teaching methods
foucusing
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focusing
on conventional
medthods
a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)
methods
more than experimental style. I
compeletly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
agree with the
statment
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
statements
that educational ways
fouces
Suggestion
face
faces
focus
folks
in learning facts
by
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in
thoeritical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
vertical
ways
intead
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of increasing the time on learning by practical methods. In
this
essay, I am going to support my argue
with
Suggestion
by
sold evident and example. In
tearms
status with respect to the relations between people or groups
terms
of advantages of
havinf student spend
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spend student
having student spend
spends student
spent student
are student spending
have student spent
more time
on
Suggestion
in
lab and improve their skills will
eventaly
after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay
eventually
help them in the real
word
everything that exists anywhere
world
of work. The Main
reson giving
Accept comma addition
reason, giving
reason giving
to support
this
calim
assert or affirm strongly; state to be true or existing
claim
is working style
compeletly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
difrenet
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
from
shool
(New Testament) a Christian missionary to the Gentiles; author of several Epistles in the New Testament; even though Paul was not present at the Last Supper he is considered an Apostle
Saul
school
aknowledement
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
acknowledgement
. To
illustrat
clarify by giving an example of
illustrate
, computer
engineer
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engineering
grudate
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduates
graduate
can't even build
website neither
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website, neither
do data analysis.
Likewise
,
MBA
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MBAs
an MBA
can not build
annual financial statement
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an annual financial statement
.
Although
, they
have memorize
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have memorized
all the information they get in school, they
can not
can not
cannot
implement it in
realy word
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the real word
real word
early word
.
Hency
,
foucing
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focusing
on
expeirmental
relating to or based on experiment
experimental
medthods
a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)
methods
would make the
sutudent
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
student
students
more
confertable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
and confident to start their
first
job.
Inconclusion
Suggestion
In conclusion
,
although
, learning facts are
importent
of great significance or value
important
for
student
Suggestion
the student
students
, they
can not
can not
cannot
go through
work
Suggestion
the work
like without having handy skills.
Therefore
, I believe spending more time on lab and doing
expeirment
the act of conducting a controlled test or investigation
experiment
experiments
will
defently
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
praper
make ready or suitable or equip in advance for a particular purpose or for some use, event, etc
prepare
student for reality of work.
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