some people say that all level of education , from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree ?

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of great significance or value

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the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge

learning

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a well-substantiated explanation of some aspect of the natural world; an organized system of accepted knowledge that applies in a variety of circumstances to explain a specific set of phenomena

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the concentration of attention or energy on something

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a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)

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to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

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a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc

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concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations

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after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay

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everything that exists anywhere

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assert or affirm strongly; state to be true or existing

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to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

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unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

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the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged

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clarify by giving an example of

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receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies

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the concentration of attention or energy on something

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relating to or based on experiment

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make ready or suitable or equip in advance for a particular purpose or for some use, event, etc

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some people say that all level of education , from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree ?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?n?

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their childen themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, many people have focused on the negative effects advertising has on children’s health, behaviour and family relationships. Advertising to children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals, such asdoctors and enginers should be required to work in the ciuntry where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.