The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
The bar chart illustrates the expenditure on various categories of entertainment in three continents Asia, Europe and
United
States over a Correct article usage
the United
five- year
period from 1995 to 2000.
Correct your spelling
five-year
Overall
, from the beginning
the amount spent on television and publishing was fluctuating, but throughout the period they were the highest source of entertainment. Add a comma
,beginning
On the contrary
, the least money was expended on cinema and video in all the continents.
In the
Asia a total of 67 Correct article usage
apply
units
was expended on the
amusement with television and publishing being the highest and cash spent on video and cinema Correct article usage
apply
was
the least. Replace the word
being
However
, in 2000 the sum has
increased rapidly by almost 43units with a rise of about Unnecessary verb
apply
20units
paid out on music when compared to the former year. Correct your spelling
20 units
Whereas
in the
Europe, Correct article usage
apply
97units
Correct your spelling
97 units
was
the grand total squandered on leisure, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
a sharp expansion of 34units
(Correct your spelling
34 units
131units
) Correct your spelling
131 units
on
a whole was splurged on relaxation by 2000.
Change preposition
as
Finally
, the United Stated
was disbursing the highest amount from the beginning till the end Correct your spelling
States
on
contrast to Asia and Europe with 184 Change preposition
in
units
in 1995 and has crossed 250 units
in five years.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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