Animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons and solutions

Mother Nature abundantly showered the humankind with all the necessary amenities to live. But, humans, who doesn't value the worth of nature, have spoilt all the natural resources for their development, which has resulted in endangering many of the animal and plant species. In the following paragraphs, we are going to discuss the causes and remedies for these issues.
Firstly
, industrialization, population and irresponsible usage of plastics have led to the contamination of land and water bodies. Especially, oceans are the dump yards for all the plastic, atomic and chemical wastes from the industries. Which has endangered many sea organisms and some are extinct now.
For example
, Whales are going to become extinct in another 30 years as their reproduction is affected by the radioactive materials dumped into the Pacific Ocean.
Secondly
, hunting has
also
become a threat to the survival of certain animals.
For instance
, the polar bears are hunted for its skin to make cosmetics, which has reduced the count of polar bears all over the world from 3700 to 53 in a decade. On the one hand, to prevent the contamination and pollution caused by the industrial development should be regularised and institutions who doesn't abide by the law should be penalised extremely.
On the other hand
, more research is needed to optimize the waste management, fishing, plastic usage, etc..
Moreover
, people should have the responsibility to discourage the sale of the products that use animal parts
such
as, animal skin dresses and accessories, cosmetics, decorative items, etc.
For example
, rhinos are mostly killed for its horn, to make home decors which has a huge market in Thailand. People should boycott these items which will result no need of hunting. To recapitulate, human development should not harm the nature or any other species as they
also
have equal rights to survive on
this
planet.
Besides
, environmental issues caused by the humans have resulted as a threat to many living things. Being environment-friendly is the main solution to
this
issue and we should try to repair the damage that has been already by being responsible by recycling the wastes.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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