Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific, research, business and academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is certainly true that sharing
information
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about science, research, business and academics is a good
to way to benefit
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way to benefit
others.
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, it could be sometime dangerous or harmful to
share
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too important or too valuable
information
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. In my opinion, we should
share
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information
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which is useful to everybody and does not harm anyone. It is always good to
share
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our knowledge with people who will get benefit out of
same
a painful emotion resulting from an awareness of inadequacy or guilt
shame
. It is always said that knowledge increases when we spread it.
For instance
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, Some people are really good at cooking, or say mathematics. They start a
youtube
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YouTube
channel and
share
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their secret
receipe's
directions for making something
recipes
or tricks of maths. Many people from society get benefits out of their sharing of knowledge on social media.
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, sharing
spritual
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
spiritual
or cultural
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on social media can
also
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change the
mind set
a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations
mindset
of the people.
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, sharing some
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
thoughts with students daily will
results
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result
in changing their perspective towards life.
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, on
contrary sharing
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contrary, sharing
any valuable or important
information
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can result in financial or
psycological
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
loss to someone.
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, if any employee shares any restricted
information
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about his company's
finacials
involving financial matters
financial
may
results
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result
in financial and reputation loss to the company.
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, in
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
would like to say that sharing
proper kind
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the proper kind
of
information
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is always useful for society and we should never
share
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any
information
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which may cause harm or loss to anyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • accelerates progress
  • innovative discoveries
  • transparency
  • open access
  • verify results
  • fraudulent
  • ethical practices
  • consumer trust
  • potential risk
  • misuse
  • sensitive information
  • genetic data
  • defense-related technologies
  • proprietary information
  • trade secrets
  • competitive edge
  • value
  • investment of time and resources
  • compensation
  • disincentivize
  • recoup costs
  • balanced approach
  • policies and agreements
  • sensitive data
  • fair compensation
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