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some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

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Nowadays,
garbage
become
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becomes
main problem
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the main problem
 in urban life which
are deposited
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is deposited
 in
waste
 recycling by
time
objective case of they
them
 become a mountain of
garbage
 and commonly faced by all city governments.
Consequently
, Governments have to think hardly and take a solution how to recycle the mountain of
garbage
. Actually, the recycling of
garbage
 could be begun from homes and separated based on the categories organic or inorganic
waste
. People could process the organic
waste
 from domestic activity like cooking, by their self with buried the organic
waste
 in their backyard or in some bag and fermented become fertilizers which it could be used for farming. Whereas the inorganic, like bottle plastic, food or drink can, paper, it's could not be processed by their self.
Accordingly
, the
garbage
's problem
have
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has
 to
faced
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face
 together between city government and urban people to take a similar action
synergistically
. Steps that have to do
firstly
 is
giving
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given
 of the important information about the effect of
waste
in
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on
 the life and how the role of urban people save our world by
waste
 recycling.
Therefore
, there is needed urban
people
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peoples'
person's
 participation to socialize
this
 campaign
to
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with
 other in their society, so awareness urban people to
waste
 recycling would be built. The above steps should be strengthened by government law to regulate participation people in recycling
waste
 campaign. The government should be issued some law regulation to take force people do recycling
waste
. Punishment would be given to the people, if they overlooked the recycling
waste
 and still trash their
garbage
 to the litter bag without recycling it. In conclusion,
law
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the law
 is needed to strengthen the recycling
waste
 campaign.

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